One Day A Sailor Was walking all over Town Trying to Find new Men to be on his new Ship he had Recently Brought the Ship Because he Wanted to Sail the Ocean he Made Posters and Tons of things to Put on Shops and Store A week Later Tons of Men Turned up to the Boat and he was not expecting Any Men to Turn up So he sprinted out of Bed and Ran to The Docks Were all the Men were Standing he Put all the Men i Single Flail they had to Pass some Test The Sailor said that the first task. Was to Buy a canoe and Try to survive on it for 2 Day until the Ship would pick them up and 2 Days Later only 10 Men Survived out of 35 Men The Sailor was very proud of the Recruits So the Next Test was to go out to Sea on the Ship and Catch there own Food Water and Survive With the Other new Sailors ...
Hi Everyone This Week like last Monday i am Writing a Story But this Week Thought i Would Switch it Up So this Week i am Only Writing half of My Story This Week I hope you enjoy this Weeks Writing If you Would Like to Try and guess whats going to happen For Weeks Writing You can Write it in the Comments Box Down Below Bye till next time everyone Bye !!!!
What a cool idea for a story Tahlya, I look forward to seeing where this story goes. You need to work on punctuating your sentences though. Where an ideas finishes and you are ready to move onto a new one, put a full stop and a capital letter. This helps the writing flow and ensure the reader can make sense of your work. :)
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