The Day in the Life of A Iron Nail

Dear Diary, iron Nail here. Today I arrived in New Zealand after a long voyage across the Pacific Ocean on the Endeavour, which was led by the great Captain Cook. After a while, when we got settled, I heard little children playing outside the  great ship and I heard men having a karakia outside on the sand. All the warriors travelled from the island to the great ship, the Endeavour. They have been given a lot of items including me and my family. We, the iron nails, have been traded for food and we were soon taken off the ship and heading to a new, strange land. Suddenly, the trading went wrong when they were exchanging the iron nails for a dog cloak. The maori people jumped off the great ship, dropped into their waka and paddled away to the shore they ran as fast as they could, trying to escape the dreadful sound ringing in their ears.  I don’t know my fate, but know we will be put to good use some day.

A Few weeks ago but i am really late on this But we have been focusing on Tuia 250 and we have a all these cards and everyone in our class got one and we had to write about it and i got a Iron Nail

So i hope you enjoy

Sleepover With Payt,Tunisia

On Friday The Last day of Term 3 Me  and Tunsia were Making Plans about what we could do in the holidays and we thought what about we go and stay the night at someones and Tunsia had just moved into a new house so we just said so were coming to your house tomorrow and she said yay so the next morning rolled around and it was a Saturday and i rang up tunisia and said ill be there at 10 and i ened up  getting there at bang on 10 as soon as i pulled up i ran inside and said Hey we had breakfast and then went up to her room and played on our phones and talked the day went by so fast and we went back down stairs and went and watched river dale from the beginning and then ran payton and said you should come over oi so she went and asked her dad  and lucky he said Yes we were so happy  and next minutes she was there we were so happy and the we walked inside talked ate some pizza and lollies and went back up to tunsias room and talked about  2 hours later we had dinner its tasted so good then we went back up stairs played some games and then watched IT it was pretty creepy .. after that we went to sleep and woke up the next morning and payton  had to go to Netball training  me and tunsia had breakfast and about 6 hours later we caught a ride with tunsias aunty to Kawakawa and went to paytons house and stayed the night and went back to our own houses the next morning

A Balancing Act

One day a man named Charlie was walking past A very old Ratilling building   that looked like it was going to fall down so he went and took a look when he got to the top a very odd man was standing at the top of the building  on a tight rope Charile look at him and the man looked back when the man looked back he lost his  balance and was about to fall charile was very frightened   that the man was going to fall so even though this would be the most frighting thing that he would ever do in his life and the bravest thing he went to stand on the rope but  fell down so he tried again ......

Arctic Journey

one Day a man named Tomas was walking  around in a new  Town hew was looking all over the place and while he was walking down a Ally and saw  dogs trying to find something to eat but the couldn't so Tomas ran as fast as he could to a near by bakery and got 5 whole loafs of bread and ran back to the dogs and ave it to them but they where still hungry so they went to Tomas new house and as soon as Tomas took them back there was homes ready for all  of them and as soon as they fell asleep and woke up Tomas gave them food and made them his own one day Tomas and the dogs where called out to help someone on the snow and they got him and just a matter of time when they got back they were freezing so they  sat infront of  there fire

Bees Writting

Bees 

Why do your think bees are important and why do we need bees ? Globally there are more honey bees then other types of bees and pollination insects so it’s the most important pollenation because they help us with all the plants and trees so that we have air to breath or we could die because we would have no oxygen so that’s two of the biggest reasons why we need bees .

Why bees are important and why we need them?

We need bees for food crops. It’s estimated that one third of the food that we consume each day relies on pollination, mainly by bees, but also from other insects like birds and bats. Bees are perfectly adapted to pollinate helping plants grow to so we have oxygen to breathe. Did you know that bees grew hair on their bodies to help carry pollen from plant to plant so that the plants get bigger and when the plant get bigger the bees get the pollen off those plants and spread it on all the other plants so they grow bigger .

What’s happening to bees ?

if your see a bee, help it and make sure it survives and don't let it die because we need bees for the world or we will have no flowers or trees, and without trees we have no oxygen. Did you know that there's something even smaller than a bee called a  varroa mite that attaches to the bee and will suck the blood out of a bee and then the bees die because there is not that much blood in a bee compared to us, like when a flea bites us .us. Bees are also starving because humans kill the plants that bees like such as gorse which is a problem plant.

Why do bees matter to you?

Here are a few of the best reasons why bees matter and why they matter to everyone else. Number 1 Did  you know a queen bee can lay 2,000 eggs a day and lives 2-5 years and that’s why their is so much honey in the world .

This is what’s happening in the world everyday there are so many bees in the world but it does mean that they do not matter. Make sure if your see a bee, don’t kill it and let it live so we can as well. Without flowers and especially without trees there would be no oxygen and without oxygen we can’t breathe.

By Tahlya                                    

Miracle In They Sky

On Day a Girl named Erika was walking home in the rain with her Mum and it was pouring Down with rain it was very unatural because the past few days  had been fulled with sunshine and they didn't know why today was a stormy  day even the weather reporter reported that it would be sunny but it wasn't well Erika and her mum where walking home Erika saw a Whale in the sky she told her mum but her mum didn't believe he so she kept telling her mum and her mum finally looked up and Saw it .......

Creature From The Deep

One day while a lady named Marissa got out of bed and was getting ready to leave for work at a new ferm and today was her first day so she told herself to be confident so she walked out of the door with a smile on her face while she was driving she noticed something coming out of the water it had very long legs...

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Why Should Young Kids Have to Go To War

Last week and for the past 3 weeks we have been focusing on our writing and our topic was about ANZAC and this was Mine

Why should young kids have to go to war

How Would your feel to be told from when your were little if your that your going to the war when your got older?  How would your feel to know that there’s a war going on around you and you’re not getting to live your life at a young age and having to kill people to win the war for your country? How would that make your feel?

I strongly believe teenagers should not have gone to war. Firstly,  young People don’t know how to fight and could get killed straight away. Secondly, they are too young to go and should be living their lives and spending more time with their family. Finally, young people did not know what to expect and it could damage their mental health.

Firstly, young people don't know how to fight and could get killed straight away. Do you know how to fight?  What would happen if you got injured or hurt? How horrible would that be, even having to hurt people or kill someone? That would make you feel horrible! If you don’t know how to fight in a war and if you didn't get training you could get killed straight away or injured. It would be very painful or you could die too. What if they didn’t know how to fight or even defend themselves? So when someone tried to hurt them or kill them what would they do? Over 4000 men and women who went to war were teenagers. what training do you think they got? Very little!

Secondly, they are to young to go and should be living their lives and spending more time with their family.  How would you feel to have to go to war when you're young and not be able to live your life even though you're young? When you turned 16 you had to go to war, often forced to like a man.Mahuta  was forced to go to war, he didn’t have a choice. He was told to go to war or be sent to jail. It was not fair, I know I would like to live my life before I went to the war instead of going to war as soon as I turn 16.  How would that make your feel? Would you like to spend the time with your family rather than fighting in a war? And if they didn’t need to go they would be told to go to jail and would stay their or if they got taken to jail straight away and not have a another chance to do anything .

Finally, young people did not know what to expect and it damaged their mental health. Do your think they would have wanted to go to war to see all the dead bodies and have to kill people and all of those horrible things? How would that make you feel to do that? Most men thought that going to war was going to be a awesome experience. You got to travel the world and go to different places. But, it’s really not that glorified.  Many soldiers ended up with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder and could not deal with everything they saw and did. And even after the war was over, when the men and women were back home, they would still be terrified and scarred by what they saw in the war.

Would you have like to have gone to war? I am strongly against teenagers going to war! Young people don't know how to fight  and could get killed straight away. They are too young to go and should be living their lives and spending more time with their family, and young people did not know what to expect and it damaged their mental health.

By Tahlya

Lets Leave Part 1

One Day a lady Named Mariah was searching around for a gift that she got given to her from her grandmother for her daughters Birthday it was a old necklace with a emerald in it her daughter name was Katelyn  and she loved Jewelry so Mariah said Im not giving up till i find it so Mariah searched and searched and searched but it was nowhere to be found until she saw something shining in a Massive grey Box and went to look in it  inside was a ......

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The Forbidden Tower Part 1

One day a girl named Dakota and her  friend Payton were walking and they came upon a Tower and they were intrigued it was very Dark and they were wondering what was inside but first they had to walk up a huge hill  but payton said No i don't want to go up there but dakota said come on stop being a scaredy Cat so Payton went with her on there way up there Payton was Terrified Suddenly a hawk Came out of now where and tried to attack Dakota and Payton but they avoided it and ran away back down the hill and Payton said i told you we shouldn't have gone !!!!

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My Holidays with My Cousins

This hoildays i had a amazing time on the last week of school holidays but the best thing about it was that i got to see my Four cousins named Zac,Steven,Beven,and Jason it was the First  time i was seeing them in  11 years so the last time i saw them i saw only one and they live in perth We had a great time together the First thing Exciting that we went to was The stone store in kerikeri and took tons of awesome photos After we went there we Went to go and have a Delicious Breakfast and Dessert for Breakfast we all had different things i had A Eggs Benedict and For dessert we had Vanilla waffles and it was really Yum tooo   i had a Amazing Last week of the holidays and im really  going to miss all of my Cousins and hopefully see them all soon ❤❤❤\

Hi Everyone This Week like last Monday i am Writing a Story But this Week is the Beginning of  Term 2 So we had to write about or Favorite Part in the holidays and this was mine i hope you enjoy  my Story and ill catch you Later Bye 

The greatest Storm Part 4

The Fog would not Clear and Even More Wave Rushed onto the Boat it was like a giant ghost had Bordered the Ship Suddenly the Captain appeared And Shouted is Anyone Else alive Suddenly A another Voice  Yelled out and Another But Suddenly there was No more There was only 3 Crew members alive and the Captain they Swam to each other and got on one of the life Boats that where still good But they where all To Tired from getting fit by all the waves and it was So Fogy to See with all the Waves Still hitting the Ship It was no use until they Saw another Ship in the Distance but they didnt see them

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The Great Storm Part 3

As Soon as the Captain Woke up after he heard the big Bang so he went to Wake up all of the Crew Members As soon as they Ran on Deck there was water ever were They had crashed in to a giant Ice Berg it had damaged all of the  Front side of the ship  all the Crew Members tried to stop  the Water from coming on the Boat But it was no use the water Just Kept Entering the Boat But Suddenly the Boat started sinking there was as Much water on the Boat to fill up The Biggest Pool in the World But the Captain Remembered that  he had tons of life Boats  on The Deck Tucked away in Case of a Emergency The Crew helped to Blow up all of the Life Boats But Suddenly a giant Wave the Size of a City came over the Boat and all the Crew members Could not Be Seen thought all of the Fog that the Wave  brung with it ??????


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The Great Storm Part 2

Today the Sailors Where going to do there second Test The Captain was going to Meet them at the Docks by the Time the Captain had gotten to The Docks the  Crew had already gotten everything Ready the Captain was Very  Surprised By what had happened when he Saw the Boat At the Docks So when he Bordered the Boat all the Crew went to meet him half a hour latter the Crew where already at sea But with No training It was amazing and The Captain went for a Nap When the Captain woke up 10 Minutes Latter To a Bang The Crew where all asleep to The Crew had hit another Ship so The Boat Was very Damaged  and the Captain went to go and Wake up the rest of the Crew Memebers


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The Greatest Storm PART 1

One Day A Sailor Was walking all over Town Trying to Find new Men to be on his new Ship he had Recently Brought the Ship Because he  Wanted to Sail the Ocean  he Made Posters and Tons of things to Put on Shops and Store A week Later Tons of Men Turned up to the Boat and he was not expecting Any Men to Turn up So he sprinted out of Bed and Ran to The Docks Were all the Men were Standing he Put all the Men i Single Flail they had to Pass some Test The Sailor said that the first task. Was to Buy a canoe and Try to  survive on it for 2 Day until the Ship would pick them up and 2 Days Later only 10 Men Survived out of 35 Men The Sailor was very proud of the Recruits So the Next Test was to go out to Sea on the Ship and Catch there own Food Water and Survive With the Other new  Sailors ...

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The City In the Clouds

Welcome to My blog This  Monday  and Every Monday i will be  Writing a Blog Post called Free Writing. We get To Write About Any thing This is My Free Writing For This Week this Piece of Writing is Called The City In the Clouds ...


One Day a Boy Named Tom Was Wondering around his grandfathers Old house Trying to Find Something Well all the Adults were Fixing up the house That was going to Be Set up for a 90s Party happening in 2 Days Tom Was only 7 Years old and he wanted something to Play with So he Went into a Room at the Back of his grandfathers house And went into a Room that he never Been in Before Its Was a Secret Room that no one had ever been in Before he went into the Room and Found a Strange Room So he Thought he Should Open it When he Opened the door he Saw a City above The Coulds it Looked Like no one Was There so he took a Look around And Suddenly A Egal Flew Right In front of him It Looked Very Angry Tom Was to Scared To Look  at it So he Ran Back though the Door And out of the Secret Room And went to Sleep that night all he could think about was That egeal so the next day tom Tried to Find The Secret Room With the  Secret Door And he Did again But this Time The Door Opened and the City above the Clouds Was gone and the door just lead into the other Room So he Went back to his Room Went Back to Sleep  20 Year later Tom was 27 and he has always Regretted Runing out of the Secret Room 

Wisteria Carrow

One Day A Auction Was  Happening  on Smith Street  In the Town  of Monganui And Tons Of People had Arived  But there was one  Person That was Most Interested In Buying things at the Auction   And his name was Matt And he was a Milion air With tons of cash that he could Buy Everything There was at the Auction So he looked Around and couldnt Find anything he wanted Until he saw something that he though couldnt be real So he made sure No one was looking and went Around the Corner that he saw the Object But it wasn't there  20 Years Latter after Matt had seen the Object he had a Son and his name was Tom One day when Toms Parents were out he was busy cleaning his Room he was hanging his Jackets up and he saw that there was water  all over the Floor  so he Looked for what was causing all the water coming out of the Closet  and he couldnt Belive his eyes it was Coming out of a Panting  when Tom went and grabed a towel to wipe the water up his whole room was Flooded  \About 10 Minutes Later When Matt got home Tom told his father Matt  But as Soon as Matt walked in the Room  It was gone Again ....

The Magic Library

One day   When a Journalist Landed on a Plane One Evening Well she was getting her Bags she Overheard   Two people talking about A Mystical Library So she went and Chatted With them About It So the next Day she was Determinant to Find the Mystical Library   

Magic Biscuits

One day A man named Bob got home he got a Surprise When he Walked into his back Yard with his dogs Dinner he saw that his dogs where much bigger then they were when he left for work that Morning That he dropped the food and ran inside with shock and went for a sleep when he woke up he thought it was just a dream and it was

Atlantic

One day a diver saw something strange some type of Creature So we Swam over to see what he had Discovered But then the Creature Disappeared   So the Diver Followed were the Creature Swam and Suddenly When he swam though it felt like he was in a different world and in fact he was he had to make sure it was real so he swam back up to the Surface to Ask his other Diver To come with him to See if what he saw was real But when he tried to Find it again it had Vanished Before his Eyes So the next day ....